My version of No More Song, What became of it?

Me and the composer spoke of  doing this song as a possible return to the stage for me, having my own band again possible, depending how this year turns out, I'm thinking of hitting the stage again.

The song is "no more" he and i thought of me doing it my way and in hopes maybe later meet up and do this together.
This song was approved for me to rearrange and was liked by the writer. he heard me and was wowed by the sound of my voice doing a warm up practice to one of the bands we both knew.

My version:
listen to his version read mine as for now this is all we could do at the moment Dany has been in bad health status.

Dany is the lead vox for waysted Generations band and song writer composor 
We met up on you tube:

Hope you all like it

Waysted Generations - No More-Female Version.

Word Re Arrange, Stormy 7-2009

Official Writings By: Dany of Waysted Generations Band

Thanks Dany,

Cover Song Re arrangement By Stormy

Composing music by the Waysted Generations Band , Dany

Main Vers

Maybe bout 4 years ago,

Thought you where the guy of my dreams.

{Told me you’d love me for ever}, said that you’d… always… be mine,

Time and time again now..

Kept hearing those story’s about you,

Every man in town is after me

“Oh boy” whatcha ya gonna do now?

Pre Course

Now’s the time for me to know…. the truth about you…..oh boy

You’re your nothing but an ass to me now… “Screaming tech” na no

Course:

Don’t come around here no more

Don’t wanna se your face no more

Don’t come around here no more,

Don’t wanna see ya no more….. “no,no,”

Vers 2

Try to run with all my money? Turn around whatcha say now hunny?

Wouldn’t try to pull that with me.

All I ‘am to you is your love slave,

Wrapped around your little finger,

Waiting for you to snap your fingers,

Always telling me ..What to do now.

Walk out? What the hell is going on

 Pre Course

Now’s the time for me to know the truth about you…..oh boy

You’re your nothing but an ass to me now… “Screaming tech” na no

Course:

Don’t come around here no more

Don’t wanna se your face no more.

…Don’t come around here no more,

Don’t wanna see ya no more…..

 “no,no,”

End Vers:

I told you once, I told you twice now….,

 Don’t show your face round me no more.

 Walk, get the hell out.

Noooooo…oooonoo no no

Course Change:

Don’t come around here no more

Don’t wanna se your face no more.

..Don’t wanna hear no more,

Don’t wanna see ya no more…..no no

End vers, course

I told you once, I told you twice, I told you not to com round here no more..oh no

Don’t come around here no more

Don’t wanna se your face no more.

…Don’t come around here no more,

Don’t wanna see ya no more….no no.

Screaming

Now owow baby…..end